8 chapters read
Gudt of wind
"Amazing story. "
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22 chapters read
Loved this so much!
"I didn't expect to find this and what a gem when I did! I love when an author is able to write chemistry right and not have dumbed down characters, they sound organic and natural with each other. The writing was tight and funny, can't wait to read more! "
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Air and fire
"I enjoyed every line of the two books. A skilfully written narrative that can only improve after an edit. I hope that some missing pieces will emerge in the water and air novels or maybe following the edit. For example, Jonas fathered a child but there was no reference to that relationship. What happened to change Keane? Where were the fairies during the attack? All in all an author to look out for. "
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2 chapters read
Great Work!
"The story started off slow. It would have been better to drop the reader straight into the action and we then have to piece the narrative from the get go. Once you got to Chapter 5 the story started to piece together. An interesting story, there seems to be more to the characters. I would definitely continue after Chapter 20. I wanted to know more!! You left the reader hanging (which is a good thing but damn ...!) Good job. Your writing style is easy and it flowed well."
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1 chapters read
Interesting settings and plot
"I like the writing style，it’s easy to read and the magic elements are interesting. it’s just that to my taste,I would usually like to see more suspense to build up during the fIrst four chapters~just an suggestion that the conflicts can be more concentrated during the beginning chapters~"
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Gust of Wind by M.A. Freeman
"Its a very intriguing and amazing book and the hero of the story is the plot itself which leaves you spellbound and curious for more like you crave to know what's going to happen next !!"
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