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When I met you - review

"The story intrigued me from the beginning. I liked her writing style. It left me wondering whether they would be able to meet again after the one night stand. There were only 2 chapters to read and I wanted to read more. Saw some grammatical errors which can be easily fixed. overall a good story."

Interesting just needs tweaking..

"Story plot is interesting. However the SPAG (Spelling, Punctuation and Grammar) needs alot of work. I find myself skimming. Which is a great shame. Totally understand if English is not their first language; possibly proof read; use a tool that assists with that! "