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Emotional and raw
"This story has explores a very heavy theme and does it really well, I loved the emotional depth. The descriptions are vivid and cinematic, making it easy to picture the bleak setting. Calla's voice feels genuine and so is her perspective on pregnancy and homelessness. If I would have to offer anything, I'd say slow down the big moments a bit, let them have their impact on the reader. Overall, a compelling read and I would have kept reading if this was longer."
"Ira"
"A pregnant 16 year old, Calla, in love with Elijah. The Father, never knew Calla was 2 months pregnant, and was killed during a robbery at a convenience store, the Baby, months later, was ready to enter the world of soft flowers and beautiful skies. Calla knew her baby would be a girl, and so named her IRA MAE..........this is a sad story due to uncertain circumstances called Fate. Yet the loss of one great love, Elijah's love for Calla and IRA MAE, will last forever, until another enters Calla's heart, Elijah was with Calla, in a dream state, in the ambulance to the hospital with their new love.....A story that depicts life, good or ugly, ups or downs, but always real and true...........one love filled the emptiness felt, at the loss of the father, but that love still existing in the soul of CAllA and now, IRA MAE. A tough story to be told someday when Calla is ready to share with IRA, who are now and shall evermore be joined together in the Triangle of love between them. I loved your Story and felt your ultimate peace when you finished your work and read your story to yourself, in peace.......with tears, peace and a smile for all who will read and share your work.........good job Melanie. william elliott"
