Pas Votre Jouet

Ashley: I enjoyed the story. It was a short one so the fast pace fit. I think something should be put in to show a time jump between paragraphs like a "****" just to make it easier to follow when we skip to the next day week or month. Over all a good read.

tatianne Ingrid: Adorei cada capitulo! parabens

lunaartsoul___: I loved the way your story unfolds. The emotional depth and structure made it feel very engaging, almost cinematic at times.I’m someone who enjoys both reading and visual storytelling, and your work really stood out to me. If you’re open to chatting about creative ideas someday, I’d love that.

Ces: This was good! Short, but really good, and I absolutely devoured it. A fun, spicy read! 🌶️🔥I honestly think this story has so much potential to become a longer, more developed novel. Oliver's behavior and motivations are intriguing, and I'd love to explore his character more deeply and understand ...

starlit_soul: Amazing story

starlit_soul: The story was beautifull. I hope that every paris find her julien who heals her.

dereelong: This was a joy to read. Not too long, not too short. Full of positive thoughts. Thank you...x

eunice: Ilike the way Clara had changed Nolan without knowingNolan should make a move let Clara know how he related with Julie so that she can calm down so the story is interesting.

Katja: Good writing, excellent story.