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Overall, really good!

"I’m enjoying it greatly. A few improvement could be made, mostly things that could be fixed by proofreading and a couple of phrases that are a a bit overused by the author. Other than that, I’m hooked!"

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"Muy buen desarrollo y construcción del mundo y sus personajes"

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I love this!

"Everything is so magical, the words float off the page and you want to read more every paragraph you get too. The love story of hatred slowly turning to lust and love gives you the same shivers that Lydia feels when the king touches her. Definitely will be ready more books to come, hopefully there's more to this story. "

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Insane

"I just love it love it. The only part is that are some pieces of forced inclusion that i didn't like. But the plot is amazing. Not sweety or the typical alpha lady history. I hope Lucius find happiness. "

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Thrilling Experience

"This book was a perfect mix of everything. Lies, deception, prophecy. I really enjoyed Lydia and Gabriels relationship, while they were quite repellective of each other at first, the gradual turn in their relationship was interesting. The sacrifice to become a full slifer was emotional. I wanted to cry, i wanted to stop reading because it was so sad. The book was well thought out and well written. Gonna go read book 2 :)"

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Flames that bind us

"Great read recommend this book however there are some grammatical errors that need addressed .when will book 2 be started looking forward to reading it "

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Excellent Story

"Great story line. I was drawn to read more and more. However, the use of incorrect words from time was distracting. I found myself interjecting the correct word to make the dialog work. I do not like that there is not a link or title listed in order to allow the reader to continue to the next book. I enjoy knowing book titles so that I can read them in order."

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I just finished the book in 3 days I think so compelling and the plots n twists just wow. You should publish this you know just saying. Waiting for your 2nd book.

"Such an amazing 👏 book. I would definitely recommend this book such a good read. I just can't wait for the next one."

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The flames that binds us ( Daughter of Fire

"Full of Suspense, totally delightful to read "

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Incredible..!!!!

"I am speechless ...!!! This book is amazing ,the plot twists are everywhere ....I loved the characters they are well written and so different from each other...The world that the author built is fabulous and magical .. I couldn't stop reading this book,i recommend it with all my heart ...👏👏👏👏👏👏😍😍😍😍"

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It is extremely wow.

"I like it It's very sensual My sister Because it is extravagant "

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Amazing, amazing, AMAZING!

"Okay, I have read a lot of books on inkitt and I usually use the internet to read these books. A lot have captivated me but not to the point that I actually downloaded the app just so I could leave a review. Suri Sabri, you are an INCREDIBLE writer. This book, Daughter of Fire was such an amazing read. At one point I cried so hard ( I won’t spoil it for the readers who haven’t read it) to the point where my partner had to hug me. Lydia is such an awesome character and I relate to her on so many levels. The need to protect to the one’s she loves and the self guilt she holds when something bad happens to them. I really really hope you continue writing and that one day, you will get the recognition that you deserve. One of the best and most talented authors on Inkitt. I have started alot of books on here but couldn’t finish it as I didn’t feel drawn, but this book is just amazing. So much love to you and your passion, it really shows with how you write. Love from a massive fan here in Australia! "

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Krux

"Your writing is beautiful. "

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The flames that bind us.

"Amazing storey loved everything about it. Characters were brilliant. Will definitely be looking forward too reading more of this authors brilliant work. 10 out of 10. "

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The Flames that bind us

"I thoroughly enjoyed this book. The characters have substance, are well-rounded and the banter is amusing. The emotion drew me in and I found myself crying a few times. Well done author! Your work has inspired me 😁🌺"

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Great book

"It's a really great book, I just think that it could use some work on romance development. You know that it's there but you have to guess a lot of things. "

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The Flames That Bind Us

"While you read this book, there is no dull moment. This was well written and is by far one of the best books I've ever read. Kudos to the author."

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The flames that bind us

"Great from start to finish enjoyed every chapter with so much activity and changes its brilliant "

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The flames that bind us

"I loved it, please tell me there's more..."

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Magnificent

"Best book I've read here so far! Can't wait for the next part!"

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