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Dreams Literally Come True

" Are you tired of the typical “tall, dark, and handsome but broken” CEO billionaire books that seemingly plague all corners of the Internet? This is the book for you; this is the ultimate book that has a independent WOMAN boss who has her shit together and doesn’t need a guy to make her interesting. Thorin, our female lead, is a perfect example of a great character who isn’t so perfect that she’s bland, and is beautifully well written and described. She was already her before the guy stepped in, and she doesn’t need anybody to reassure her about her own worth and knows exactly who she is. And that’s so refreshing to see and read, after reading millions of books where the girls only get better after the guy shows up and helps her get better. But you know who the real gem of the entire book is, even more better than our amazing Thorin is Lucas. I have NEVER swooned over a male lead character and envied the female character more than I ever did in my entire life when reading this book. He’s the actual dream guy, and you will be falling for him only a few chapters in. The little things that he does for Thorin and his character is so dreamy (I literally can go on for hours), feels like she was dating an angel. Now, before you’re thinking that he’s a typical good guy character and guy next door character, no. The author has this talent to make all of her characters feel like real people that you would meet, and real people who have their own struggles and motivations. I have never thought Lucas was perfect that had no flaws, but this dude is literally the sweetest person ever, and I don’t even know him and he’s not even real. I believe this is one of the best books on Inkitt, and I can say that with 100% honesty and belief. This will always be in my top three books so I highly recommend the read!!!"

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😍😍😍😍😍😍

"🥰🥰🥰🥰😍😍😍😍"

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my heart is aching

"the story made me moved and cry and how the story touch to the readers "

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True love

"Where can i fine me a man like Lucas. This book makes me appreciate love, it reminded me why love is the most beautiful and why we all need some loving. I love you author"

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Mr ceo

"I just love it"

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Miss Montreal

"I really enjoyed this story. Good romantic storyline. Well written. Grammar mistakes here and there, but it doesn't take anything away from the story. Please keep on writing. "

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AMAZING

"This is a book who deserves all the stars. I am in the love with the characters... The flow, pace,of story is awesome... I was literally dumbstruck by the epilogue. Please make the squeal..all the best dear "

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Miss Montréal

"I love love this story, it's not the usual we get and it's soul refreshing! I like the way you portray your female and male protagonist, keep blowing our minds and refreshing us. Good job. 👏👏👏😘"

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Thor

"What to say.....the book is just amazing. Thorine is the best female protagonist and Lucas damn makes me swoon over him he is soo sweet. Please continue writing such lovely book .I LOVE the book and your writing it is just amazing "

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Laiza

"This is so frustrating, Thorin and Lucas dancing around their feelings instead of really kissing"

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A LOT!!!

"ΤΟ ΛΑΤΡΕΥΩ!!! ΕΧΕΙ ΠΟΛΥ ΩΡΑΙΑ ΠΛΟΚΗ!!! ΝΑΙ ΘΑ ΤΟ ΠΡΟΤΕΙΝΑ ΚΑΙ ΣΕ ΑΛΛΟΥΣ."

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Thorin and Lucas

"Such a lovely story. Your incredible writer. Please update soon 😘"

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Miss Montreal

"I'm so excited for the next update. I hope they'll be together forever."

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Only a man who can keep up with woman behaviour

"This book really give different vibe than usual typical employer and employees relationship.. "

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MS Montreal

"It was a stupid ending. I didn't understand that at all"

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Miss .....

"Seriously, I do not know what else to say other than I'm heartbroken. In fact you have torn me apart. I've been thinking of what the end would look like with him being an earl in Italy and she a CEO in her company but you drop the bomb on me. I'm gloomy and angry maybe sad. Lucas has done so much and loved her for so long for her to throw or end the relationship with a call?? I thought she had made a promise to his mom. I thought she had made a promise to him, or is this a case of insecurity? Why should she be. If this is how she treats a man who has taken her bullshit for so long, fell in love with her and took care of her, then I must say he deserves better. The writing skills are okay though sometimes I became confused. Thanks"

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Interesting

"The flow is good. But the story is a bit slow"

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Ms Montreal

"Grammar and sentences were choppy and miss used , confusing better editing needed the ending was awful we were left hanging big time good story line"

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Novel

"Good plot and story"

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Something's missing

"There's this connection between the characters which is missing. I didn't feel the connection which is important for me. I personally think that. Even with the ending i didn't feel any distraught which i normally do that's why i avoid sad and bad endings. I'm a very emotional person. I've read hundreds of romance stories but i didn't feel anything with this book. I didn't feel like commenting which i normally do when I don't like or do like things in the story. I didn't dislike the story but i didn't like it either. This story can be so much it has potential. That's why I'm reviewing it. I feel you have potential in writing but you are missing emotions. I can be wrong of course but this is just my point. "

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