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Defining Us

"I cannot express how much I have enjoyed her stories! I first discovered her on Galatea with The Sum of Us. In Harper's words... I love her writing "Oh, oh much!" I was beyond excited when I discovered it's sequel, as well as this series. Thank you 😊. I don't know what your life is like now, but I would be so ecstatic to find more of your material. Keep it up! You're amazing 👏 "

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Loved it!!!

"From start to finish this story will have you hooked. Its not just a love story about a Prince and Princess, it's about true friendship between people who meet at high school. Each person has their own story to tell, and the author very cleverly tells each one. I feel like I know each one personally. I'd really like a follow up, just to see the next stage in their journey's. I also really want Ryan and Elle to get together ❤ Anyway, if you're looking for agood read, the kind that keeps you up late at night, this is it! Don't just take my word for it, I promise you'll be hooked by the end of chapter 1!"

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Defining Us

"Absolutely amazing book with totally lovable characters and well thought-out plot. I honestly couldn't put the book down after starting it. There are little to no grammatical mistakes and the writing style is reader friendly. The friendships between this nine individuals with their own lives and how they blend together really well keeps the reader hooked. Since the characters are fighting real life problems, the story becomes relatable. The best part is that even though the book started as about Izzie, both the parts show development on behalf of all the characters. The fact that there are positive female relationships in the book and all of them being accepted by everyone in the group as they are, makes the book that much more enjoyable."

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Such a beautiful story

"In one word: AMAZING!"

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Xoxo😍💕

"This novel is definitely not getting enough attention. It is really amazing. Buh I'm gonna miss my naughty nine😢. I love you author ❣️❤️😍💕"

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More power to you

"Looking forward to more amazing reads from you"

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Loved it!

"Amazing story!"

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The story continues

"I believe in my review of the first book I said something along the lines of 'I loved that it was not a story about two people and we get to know more about the other characters'. Boy, did I not expect THIS❤️ I've got everything I've wanted and much more❤️ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐"

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Must-read

"It has a perfect dose of every theme: Family, friendship, love, pain, mental health, etc. It's my favorite book so far, and I love how the author is committed to every character. I didn't think it was possible, but you effortlessly made another book as awesome. "

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Defining Us

"I have enjoyed everything about this story as well as part 1. The only part that needs some work is the grammar, but I'm too into the story to care all that much."

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A true masterpiece!

"Would love a continuation of the story or an update to see how their futures progressed. Truly loved every character!! "

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I need more!

"I need a book three...or an epilogue of a 10 year reunion! SOMETHING! I'm so emotionally connected to these characters."

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Loved it!!!!

"I really enjoyed it felt like I was part of the gang seeing myself in some of them. Thank you for writing it "

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Defining us

"Awesome read! I literally couldn't put my phone down! I will definitely be telling my friends to read both of these stories!"

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Every character shines

"This was a great continuation of the first book each character really had their chance to grow and have their time in the spotlight. No character was lost in the background even with the addition of a few new ones. Showing how each of them were affected and tackled the matters of their past and present. It really showed how your friends and family can help bring a person out from their shell. Looking forward to seeing how the characters develop after High School. This book was a fitting end to the gangs time at Sella Moora!"

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Loved it ❤️

"Thank you loved this book just as much as the first. Looking forward to book 3. Great work you are awesome ❤️"

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Discovering me part 2

"ess1223 you are my favorite author here. Your writing style punctuation grammar everything is spot on. Just one request if you could write who is speaking after every dialogue it would be easier to understand. Other than that. I looooooove it. 😘😘😘😘"

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Amazing story

"Reading it second time and it's just as consuming as it was before💕"

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Love the characters!

"I love the illustration that combining different skills makes the group stronger."

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For now

"I love both books. I just wish that second book is a bit shorter. I recommend it to my friends and sister and they love it so far. Can't wait to start reading next book. "

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