A really pleasant read

"I really enjoyed this. I would love to see a longer piece of fiction with this trio. I thought that it was a great cast, with the lovable older soldier, the wily teenage sniper, and the prickly sorceress. It was so fun to watch them interact, especially with the burping contest. I thought it was so funny when they were all laughing at Ivy and Ace fell out of his chair. There wasn't a whole lot of story here, but you gave the reader enough to understand what was going on. Like i said, I would love to see this story expanded. You gave the reader an immediate sense of time and place. The only thing that confused me was the fact that magic was paired with weapons like rifles. But even that choice was interesting, and I wanted to know more about the world this was set in. The dialogue was a lot of fun in this story. I thought that your writing style was very clean and polished, and I don't think I ran into any typos. Great work! I would definitely read more of this if it were to come along. :-)"