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Offspring

"I loved it! Very well written!!"

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Kerri Burch

"I like the story "

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It's too lovely

"It's too nice thrilling and lovely I love it"

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Offspring

"I like where this is going just wish it was longer. I like reading this book so just keep it going Bonnie "

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Offspring

"Loved it!!! Thank you for sharing your story with me "

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OFFSPRING

"Watch pronouns, spelling & extra words. Delano needs to show more feeling for Kaitlyn & babies."

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Great job!

"The books is long. But in a good way. There are errors but that can be overlooked and, the premise of this book is completely different from ones that I’ve read. 💕 some will say that it’s similar to twilight in ways but aren’t all vampire books. You can tell that the authors writing changes throughout the story ❤️ great job!"

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Offspring

"It's a really brilliant book so far but it's a shame I have to continue reading it on wattpad, when i prefer inkitt better as it's easier to get to the next chapter on inkitt than wattpad. So please update it on inkitt"

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What where’s the rest

"Is there going to be more to this story"

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Pkeasepleasr

"When is the rest of the story coming????? I love the way you write.. Sometimes the story goes a little slow, but overall a good story! I love the way your imagenation works. Hope to read more soon and please, keep writing👍📖"

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Offspring

"I chose this rating because I absolutely love this story and i recommend it to everyone, and i hope the author gets the hype on this story that she/he deserves. I dont think there was anything that i didn't like, but what i liked about it were the characters and what the story is based on."

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Offspring

"I would like to say , I really enjoyed reading this story so far. It has some grammer issues but all together a great story and can't wait to read more"

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Great entertaining story

"Love the book. Very captivating."

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Beautiful

"Love it and can't wait to read more "

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Off spring

"First vampire book and loved it"

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Awesome!

"Delano is a disappointment at this point, he seems to just lead her on. For her to be his ‘beloved’ Adrian has more fire than he does, he’s battling day and night for his love as Delano doesn’t even seem tempted by his. Abel is the rock star. And the mysterious Sam....hmmm, there’s a story there! Great job! "

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Read all of this in 2 days really enjoyed!

"There is nothing I dislike. I'm very much looking forward to updates. I read through everything in 2 days. Keeps me on the edge of my seat. "

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Love it!!!

"Please update"

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Excellent

"I love it I will probably give to my sister. It's very good "

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Offspring

"Superb book so far👍 can't put it down please hurry up with more chapters please 😊 "

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