Simple and fanscinating

"I love it when an author can take the same story (a commoner marries a prince and becomes a princess) and turn it into something completely new. The idea of the girl who worked the apple orchard and the mysterious stranger that helped her expand her business was very good. I never expected him to turn out being the prince, although I suspected that he loved her. The writing was clear and evocative and kept me reading. The only reason I marked it down was because it moved a little slow in places. Good work!"