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Michael James Wilbur
"Very nice horror story that I can't help but read in my head with the voice of Otis Jiry (and I recommend the author submit this to him or the Chilling Tales for Dark Nights group for future reading). The setup is nice, and the twists were cleverly done. I do have one small critique, however; I feel the final sentence could be removed, as the preceding sentence's sting seems more poignant without it. Other than that, fantastic spook fit for any late night campfire gathering."
Powerfully Disturbing
"About halfway through I could see where this was going and couldn't help but smile to myself. It seems our expectations of others can really begin to distort the world we live in; especially if we value and respect that individuals opinion. Well done."
