What is your opinion?
Wow! True artistry! :)
"Beautiful! :)"
Sweet!
"This story is written really nicely. I could picture it in my head, and the people seemed relatable, the events interesting and sometimes sweet. I liked the fact that the characters weren't perfect, and I also like the direction the story seems to be going in. Furthermore, the writing style is very enjoyable, and it is pretty well written (apart from a few awkward sentences and a couple grammar mistakes, which I pointed out. I hope that's helpful.) In a couple of areas, you could add a tinge more details, or show instead of tell, but mainly, this is a very nice, quick read. I liked it that the characters weren't predictable, although I think they were consistent (however, there's too little written as of yet to know for sure.) The first chapter was a good start to the story, probably more of a prologue than anything else, and a good way to give a little background. I certainly hope you continue writing this beautiful, moonlit story!"
