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"This short story really made me think. It brought home how quickly things can go wrong sometimes, especially when driving in bad conditions. I didn't see the twist at the end coming, and it's going to stick with me for a long time. Technically, this is perhaps a little heavy on dialogue, but it does get the point across well and I think it shows the character's panic better than description would. I'd recommend this to anyone."

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