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Your story has blown my mind totally..! Ur writing style is too good ..keep up the work..am def goin to read more of your work

"Your story has blown my mind totally..! Ur writing style is too good ..keep up the work..am def goin to read more of your work"

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Excellent

"I like the way the story has been created to make it more exciting,wooing and breathtaking.i love the author's writing skill"

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Keila

"It's really nice to find fanfic that aren't based around the expected of either childhood friends, mob boss, pop start meets a fan etc.- though these can also be executed well they are still abit cliche at times but this was different, loved everything, writing skills are top notch. All I know now more than anything is that I wanna go to a sex club but I will have to travel in order to gain that experience and if ms. Rona don't get her shit together I'm going waiting for a very very long time. "

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Great story!

"I like how the book is well plotted and the writing skills of our lovely author is exceptional! "

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Amazing.

"The plot is so unique and the writing is so beautiful. I love this story so much. ❤❤"

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In Motion | Jungkook

"This style of writing never fails to amaze me. It may be long and dragging for some, yeah we live in a new world where everything is fast-paced, but for me, I love digging in to details, slow, relaxed. Attention to details. I think that's the distinct signature of the author. She's my favorite :)"

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In Motion

"The Best yet"

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Welp...there goes my existence

"Straight up...I've been reading this story for the past 4 hours. No regrets. “In Motion” is probably one of the best fictions I’ve read yet. It’s extremely captivating and you can genuinely relate to the characters feelings. The story really has you on edge at all times which makes it that much more thrilling to read. Sometimes you feel totally tense and anxious and in other moments you want to turn into a soft puddle of goo. You better have a huge stock of holy water in you pantry cause hun I guarantee you that your gonna need it. The authors writing style is authentic, unique and out of this world! truly Amazing!"

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The best story that I’ve ever read

"Absolutely amazing!!! "

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In Motion

"just amazing. kinda makes me want to try those stuff."

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in motion

"bro it’s amazing "

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In Motion

"Amazing sexy and detailed I love everything about it! It makes me crave more of the story!"

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My favourite fanfic ever

"Absolutely love the style of your writing and this entire plot. I’m a huge fan of a slow build up and this series is just perfect. "

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Good novel

"I really like this but it’s really slow in updates"

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Cannot wait for next chapter

"Absolutely love it!!"

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TOO MUCH

"Nothing. Just too much love for this story. This is by far the most well written story that i have ever read. From the plot and its twists to the expressions and realizations of the characters to exchange of lines! This is a story that’ll lead you to wanting more. "

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Omg

"Love love love love LOVE this series!! Thank you for updating and thank you for your writing!! I look forward to see what comes next and I am excited to see how their date went! This series is the perfect mix of excitement and anticipation. "

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Yass For Story creativity

"Hey this story is sexy! Very well written and left me wanting more. Hopefully there is more?!? Definitely following this author right now!"

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I'M OBSESSED😍

"I read soooo many erotic FFS and this one got me likeee guuuurl I need more asap😍😍😍😍😍😍I love the story, and the characters and everything.Keep up the good work and I wish you the best of luck 💖💖💖💖take careee"

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Great work.

"The way you describe all the feelings of each character is so amazing. This is definitely my favorite story about Jk so far. It's the first time that I'm reading this kind of story. The plot is very original and unique. Thank you so much for putting so much effort on this. "

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