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Siren Deep

"Interesting plot! I loved this story! I hope you write more ones like this, you amazing author! "

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Best mermaid story I have ever read.

"Xeria dangling between her hunger and her instincts, and Finn rationalizing his feelings as if they are some sort of acquired affliction got me so transfixed in the narrative. Outstanding writing. "

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Nice story

"I really enjoyed it. Different from everything else I end up reading. Even though it was different it was good. The plot was good and you see in both thier perspectives. I like seeing her inner struggles and then his. I like that they were on equal ground for the most part. She never really let her instincts get the better of her when she wanted him. She never tortured him like I see in many books where the guys (some girls) torture the partner."

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xLunarAngelx

"I'm really loving this story."

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The book

"I loved it !"

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Love the animalistic air

"Really love this your writing skills are perfect adding to that agreat realistic story line when it comes to her need for flesh the want and the affection that was created between them both have a inner fight yet can't stop them selves from having what they need both are animals both have need's they can't stop "

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Siren Deep

"I wanted to find a different kind of story when it came to mermaids or sirens instead of the whole "she gives up her tail for a land male" plot. For a little while, I was rooting for her to kill him 😂 The ending is really satisfying and I do kinda wish the book was a little longer; but the length is perfect too. This is a story I'd recommend to all my friends who enjoy fantasy and something a little more different than the average story."

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Animalistic Perspective

"It's a very interesting short story with a more animalistic and less fairy tale perspective on mermaids. Due to the shortness of the story I found it difficult to get fully into the characters, but they were believable and their feelings etc. were well described. I would've loved it if this story was twice as long. The writing style is special and the pirate speak took a bit to get into as a non native speaker but it was worth it. I'd definitely recommend this story - just... maybe don't read it right before going for a swim 😉"

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amazing

"an amazingly realistic (er well as realistic as fiction can be) very entertaining and romantic "

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Siren Deep

"At first, I was hesitant. Because let’s be honest, how more cliché can you get when it has something to do with mermaids? Now i’ve seen every episode of H2O and I absolutely LOVE mermaids. So when I saw it on my community page, I was like, yeah let’s read it. Not only does it give you a strong female “antagonist” (I think she’s the protagonist bc she’s pretty badass) but it also gives you plot twists, and so much more. I love how she says his name as well. I would like to learn how to pronounce her name, though, lol. Thank you so much for this wonderful read, Author. Keep it up. "

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Lovely little fantasy

"I enjoyed reading this short story. I love how the siren was portrayed as more than a pretty seductress. They're meant to be terrifying, and you got the balance of scary:sexy perfectly. My only criticism would only be his accent, as it's quite distracting. But that's purely subjective. Overall great story :D"

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Loved it!!!

"LOVE,LOVE,LOVE this book! Not your average,” im not evil like my family” Siren books,AMAZING"

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Siren Deep

"It's amazing"

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Fantastic tale

"This is a very creative and believable spin on the classic tale. Suspenseful and well-paced, I enjoyed the story and it’s atypical character and plot development. Very well done!"

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Great

"A very good story but also weird I've never read such a story like this but it's still very good "

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Different and a nice read

"I really like this book. Very different from most stories I have read. "

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Siren Deep

"Marvelous story. Love the writting stile! Keep ot up cant wait for more..."

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Captivating!

"Captivating story, very well written. "

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Siren Deep

"Neat read and I loved the ending. "

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Great story so far

"Great story so far "

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