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"This was a great story. Characters are relatable and the plot flows well. Hopefully there will be a second book to continue the story!"

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This is great!

"This is a very interesting novel so far and I definitely can't wait to see the development with your unique characters. You do a very nice job with giving each of them different personalities and backstories. The only thing that threw me off a little was that this story takes place in the distant future, which makes me wonder just how far off in the future it is. The characters and setting seem like they are more in a medieval style of living with Kings and little technology, but then they jump ahead to having a dash on their forearms. It makes it a little difficult to keep up with exactly what technology they have or don't have, despite this being in the distant future. Aside from that--and again, that's just my opinion--this is an awesome story and I am definitely going to keep reading. Great job!"

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Amazing!!

"Oh my god! I love your writing. Its so descriptive and illustrious. I am looking forward to reading more :)"

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"It was pretty interesting :)"

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Wonderful novel!

"This book had me interested from the very beginning. I was laughing and crying with the characters through the whole thing. The character development was very good, and the story kept moving so you were never stuck wishing it would just continue. With a captivating story, intriguing plot twists, and lovable, relatable characters, I highly recommend this book."

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