What is your opinion?
writting skills
"I really loved your story and had a great time reading it. When will the next chapter be available and what will happen in it. What inspired you to create this story and are you working on any other projects? Could you also recommend a story for me to read "
Mafia
"This story has so many plot with different families of the Mafia, but I am still waiting for the romance for the main character."
"null"
"null"
"null"
"null"
Good idea, executed amateurly
"The writing seems hasty and strange, like a child trying to fit into their mother's shoes. Honestly, it needs editing."



