Great beginning

"I read the first two chapters and hope to get to the rest soon, but what I read was fantastic. In that short period of time you managed to present the protagonist and her situation in an understandable way, and then you gave me a picture of the conflict. I really liked the idea of the ghosts that are haunting the land...and the fact that they are trying to come back. The scene with the groundskeeper and the "detective" was really well done. And although I thought that the interaction between Margo and Quint moved a little too fast, I enjoyed that too. This is a great story. I can't wait to read more of it. Great work! :D"