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Vetitum Magicae

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Summary

“How long I’ve waited for this day to hold your hands” he continued... Both orbs had pierced their chest and making a home in their souls. They wouldn’t leave now, it was a part of them... Forbidden magic is the same as forbidden love. The laws of this world is not the same as the laws of the world we know today. Potions and spells, a cliche, but hybrid witches and wizards, along with things pulled out of the deepest dark imagination of a commoner? Definitely not cliche. This is the norm for everyone and everything in the year 2020 of the Drex galaxy. No longer is the planet a calming blue and nurturing green, but repainted with a depressing blue and poisonous green, where good people live. Here, white is evil and good is black, everyone is anything and anything is anyone, but like all good stories, which side will the protagonists stand on?

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Insight

A young male, no older than 21 sprinting out of his Garden and to his secret spot which was a lake, through a hole in the bushes. He froze like a deer in the headlights and smirks to himself. He bursted into particles in seconds…multicoloured particles. They moved with the wind as quick as lightning and swirled around the second figure.

A girl.

The particles joined and formed the human boy. “Lovely to see you here, my darling” he spoke. Millions of words were exchanged through the boy’s worried look and the girls streaming tears.

“W-why are you here?” the girl asked

“Because you wanted me to be.”

“But I didn’t ask f-”, “I know you didn’t… but I could feel it.”

The girl was no older than 19 and as pretty as a diamond with the scent of a rose. “Why are you crying?” the male asked, his tall figure towering hers. His hand now on her cheek, gently wiping the drops of salty water from her eyes.“Y-your highness, I-” she began, but stopping suddenly, due to his emotions displayed through his facial expression

“I thought I told you to stop calling me that…My name is Caleb, not your majesty” he growled nicely. Indeed, he tried to sound nice, he tried to calm down, but the words that seeped through her mouth caused the memories to rush through out his head, spin like a storm and come to life in quick flashes again.

“I…I’m sorry, but we can’t” she said, “I-i-it’s not right…”

Her retreating figure left him feeling lonely, but again, he split and his coloured particles quickly surrounded the girl, spinning around her and joined again. The blue particles were the representation of his soul that he had left, the green, purple, yellow and orange ones were a representation of his personality, the white for his magic… and the red ones,representing his beating heart that yearned for her.

“My love, do not do this again” he begged.

“No! I-i….It’s Vetitum Magicae, it’s f-”, “Forbidden magic” he ended

“Exactly…”. She began leaving once again, only to be stopped by the hands of her lover, which grabbed her wrist and spun her around, leaving her in his arms.

“You are right my love, everyone knows about the rule. A Leaphine, a male royal can only ask for a high class female’s hand in marriage, nothing lower than a-”

“Canarphine, a Status…which is what I am”

“~No way! I didn’t know that~” he spoke with sarcasm.

“Caleb! You’re royalty! A R-”, “A Regium! I know.”

With a sigh, she continued speaking, “Every child born was made to know the different status and who the royals can marry” she stated, “Yes…especially the royal children themselves” Caleb added

“Let me go” she spoke, trying to end the conversation. She already knew how it was going to end

“My love, listen” he started

“No! Caleb, I don’t want to listen to anymore of this!”

“Alria!” he yelled, making her figure trembled, “Just listen to me”. “What?!”

“My parents…They’ve agreed to change it,” he smiled, “…the law”

The sadness in Alria’s eyes disappeared so suddenly that she herself was confused. “T-the law, as in…”

“Yes, My love. And they’ve chosen to seal it with a spell”

“No way…impossible!”

“Yes! I’m being serious, my dear”

“T-then…that means it’s going to be-”, “Yes, a grounded golden law which can not be changed.” Caleb finished, “not ever”

“Wow, it’s going to be a new golden rule! No more had been added in centuries!” Alria smiled. She was about to continue, but Caleb pressed his body against hers, lips together and sealing their love.

Vetitum Magicae is forbidden magic

Forbidden magic is forbidden love

The only way this can be broken is not by magic, but something greater

Overcoming the challenges with hope

Defeat the danger with bravery

Have faith, emotions are much stronger than what is most used today

Faith is born from love

Here you can’t fight magic with magic

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1. Insight
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