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Not the Baby's Fault

"It was a good short story, enjoin it greatly. I've notice that it's his dream that Jackson had when he got shot. Now it coming true. I can't wait to read the next book."

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Ohhhh

"Exciting story with everything a good reading needs. I love the plot a lot."

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Wow

"This book was written in a confusing way"

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Not the babies fault

"Great story. Loved every minute reading it 💝 can't wait for the follow up book 📙 keep it up author "

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Not the babies fault

"I really enjoyed cant wait til second book come out"

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Not the babies fault

"OMG.....I need more!!!"

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Not the babies fault

"It was a fun read, it was sometimes really confusing because you didn't separate a memory from the present time and sometimes you writing style is overall confusing but besides that this story is really interesting and mysterious. This is also my first book I read on Inkitt "

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I like it

"I really have to say I enjoyed this novel. Well done!"

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Cop's love

"Usually male is the cop in most of the story.... Bt its certainly different experience to read 👌"

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Not the babies fault

"Great story.... "

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"Great story "

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Meh

"I like the plot in general but not the way it was written. The transitions aren't smooth and you're using different point of views."

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Not the babies fault

"Some chapters didn't add up. Good though"

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Really ?

"Few facts not accurate in the story; some of the story doesn’t make sense; story seems rushed and lacks detail "

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A good start

"I went into this book wanting to enjoy it but when I started reading it, it felt more like I was reading an outline for a story then an actual story. There are also these big jumps in the story timeline sometimes that feel like they come out of nowhere. Has the potential to be an amazing story. "

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Not the babies fault

"Everything from the storyline is bad Wasn't punctuated well And the author suddenly jumping scenes and adding another story altogether is not just good. More could've been done."

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