What is your opinion?
Tierra doble
"Muy bien muy interesanfe como va descubriendo Los diferentes bills como se mezclan etc no se puede parar de leer "
Great job
"Enjoyed this more tgan i thought i would when i first started reading. Great writing skills. Props to the author"
The Orthogonal Galaxy
"Amazing story telling!!! I couldn't help but identify with the main characters. I felt their doubt, their frustration and fear. I felt their hope, their faith, their wonder. Excellent writing! Hope there's a sequel!"
Orthogonal Galaxy
"Good science, good characters,gripping story, want to know the rest of the tale."
Orthogonal Galaxy
"I Iiked Theodor suspense Mit was sometimes a Bit lengthy A must fort every SF-Fan "
The orthogonal galaxy
"I really enjoyed your book. I loved the way you developed the characters, it definitely left me wanting for a sequel. Good job on your book"
Good
"Very good plot interesting "
Astronomy
"It was an interesting novel. "
The orthaganal galaxy
"Good story hooks you early , like thoughts and references to science . Well thought out. "
The plot is just mind blowing.
"The story is just epic! Keep it up."
Heavy Science & Tech
"My main problem with this story is it is loaded too heavy with science & technical terms. And some chapters are simply too long. The story starts off all about Camp Mars. Yes we are 30-50 years in the future and not only have a base on the moon but a pretty nice complex in some crater on Mars. NASA had said once we could get to Mars in 6 months but more recently they admitted a capability of only three months each way. In this novel they can do it in a little over a month and there are 10 billion people on earth as opposed to seven now. But a weird happening jolts NASA and some interesting things are learned. There is a troubling void in the story. We never learn WHY Paol Joonter was framed for murder. Why not someone else? From the court evidence it is clear that someone went to a lot of trouble to set up Paol. Or he is guilty! There is a second book in this series called 'The Twisted Galaxy.' Paol & his wise-cracking cellmate turned astronaut Blade will have new challenges & adventures. While some of the science input in this story is speculative & theoretical most remains real & well-researched. Even a focused novice can learn a few things but our author & computer engineer needs to go a little easier on the average reader. Maybe thin out the asteroid belt for newbie space travelers."
Interesting Concept
"Interesting story but became unrealistic with the convicts as astronauts. Lots of typos and grammatical errors. Do you have proof readers?"
Deceiving
"It dwells too much outside the main topic. Moments of great interest are plagued with lenghty narration of meaningless text, it toyally dilutes the main theme. I had to skip page after page of uninteresting out of focuw writting "
