Smooth Writing!

"It's still early for a complete review but I will say that the description pulled in a good amount of curiosity for me. I think the writer style is smooth and you really portrayed the characters well! The characters don't feel monotonous to me, full of life instead given the way you wrote their interactions so I'd say it's good achievement. I would say, though, that I don't know if I should take it as a give-away spoiler from the preface given that Oliver is introduce quick in the story, so as much as I'm confused about connecting the two, I'm also looking forward to how it turns out! Can't wait for the plot! You have good potential, please keep writing!"