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Very well done and ready for a sequel

"Incredible story. Extremely well written. Didn’t want to put it down. Is there a sequel to this. It’s one of the best stories I’ve read in a long time "

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Altered Children

"One is inextricably drawn into this story of preschool children endowed with artificially enhanced special talents. What ensues is a struggle of mankind pitting civilians against governments, united nations and war be it domestic, foreign or interstellar by militaries rogue or otherwise. Science fiction or not, it is an entertaining social study."

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Altered Children

"Intricate and entertaining story. Delves into human nature across this planet and beyond. There are some unexpected plot twists and hours of entertainment here. Good read."

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Altered Children

"The novel and story have gone through an evolutionary process - tightening up the dialogue and finding greater economy in the narration. This has all been for the better, and we look forward to reading exciting and thought-provoking shorter works from this author."

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Altered Children

"The "Blurp" gave me a good overview of the story I was about to read. I found that the over use of qualifying the personnel a little off putting, however the story flowed naturally once the characters had been introduced and took me, the reader, into wanting to know more. It definitely is an interesting premise more in the idea of Star Trek, which I enjoy. I liked reading this and look forward to the next installation of the trilogy."

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