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Daddy's Little Surprise

"Interesting"

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Love it!

"I absolutly love your story. At the beginning I was a bit skeptic, because Andy accepted everything so easily, but as I continued it was just getting better and better! I reread the story so many times. Hoping for some more updates :D "

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#captured

"You are one unique author which automatically makes this story a unique one. With your passion as an author you capture. This story really captured me, although i have only just gone through the first half of it. CONTINUE WRITING and don't let anybody tell you to stop this magnificent art of yours. May you keep the fire burning. ps. I am just a teen but i understand a great lot about life and to be honest i have read alot of books to know a true author. By the way i would love a story based romance with a person's father's friend. Thank you for making my day. I'll now go straight ahead to read the other half. CHOW! and good luck. Please consider me as a friend."

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I absolutely love!

"I love this story so much that I can literally feel myself playing the character, I'm honestly hooked on this story that is also on Quotev on the author's account! I love seeing updates and improvements its an amazing story definitely deserves 1st place."

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Daughter discovery

"A little slow developing but a well thought plot. Kept me readingit all at once until late at night!"

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