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"Say what you feel before it's too late..." Yes, that's what they all say. However, for Ely and Gerald's case, it was more difficult than you think. There was a woman, Ely, heartbroken because she was to late to confess her love to this man, Gerald, and wants to forget about him. Then, at the other side, Gerald was left behind by the woman he loved and now finally realized Ely's worth which made him fall for her. However, there was more to Ely than you think... Will they ever get together? Find out in this verse novel as they go through twists and troubles.
What Happened?
Long ago, I loved a lady
Who I thought was the one for me
Golden locks, her dress was lacy
“Talk to her”, you whispered to me
Frankly, with your help, we became one
Day by day, our love to the stars
You the life saver, she the sun
Though, the sun left, darkness spread afar
I don’t know what the heck happened
The darkness around made me think
After you left, I realized
You were my lamp forgotten
I should’ve seen this sooner but now we’re distant, my Elysium, Ely…
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