What is your opinion?
The bedtime stories
"I liked it because it was short, sweet and because it describes a character (the old woman), as something I've never heard of or seen in a move. I do wish it had lasted a bit longer, should definitely do a youtube video thing like this for sure. I'd recommend it to my mom and I give it a good rating bc I enjoyed it :)."
Home!
"We both write about home! interesting. you see in horror I see it in romance and nostalgia and imagination! One topic two different view point!"
Wow.
"You had a soft beginning, but suddenly I was immersed in this terrible tale. The way you wrote was fantastic - I recommend it to anyone who loves horror or even paranormal. Your narrative style was fantastic, your grammar practically flawless. Your characters were immediately lovable, and you brought to life relatable sisters, a nice family - and a horrible woman. Amazing work. Not only were the right details used to be mentioned again later in a new context, (an impressive feat), this had to be one of the best stories I've ever read on Inkitt. I was hooked to the very end,"
Short, Intense and Creepy!!
"This short but intense horror story calls to mind the taut, creepy and outright mind-bending novel and hit movie “The Shining” and models great horror writers such as Stephen King. More suspenseful than gory, it features an exceptionally drawn villainous witch of an evil character whose decrepit appearance, maniacal laugh and frightening action keeps the reader both engaged and disoriented throughout. Wonderfully done as a short story, it would make for a powerful extended story, in which the writer could put more exposition into the protagonist’s fear and further explanation of the backstory of the antagonist if he chose to do so. A vivid and riveting short, but intense horror piece."
