Inkitt
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I love the subject matter

"This was a great story I would recommend this to my friends who love horror movies! And my self again, keep up the great work. I look forward to see more of you writing"

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Woow, brilliant 😀

"Amazing work I love it 😀great job "

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Good... a lot wierd but good

"Definitely something new "

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I am still at chapter 6 but it is very amazing so far

"I would recommend this to ages 16-18 i did not like how the dad wasn't in the book very much, and i would rate this a 1,00/10"

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Great

"So far so good, want to keep reading"

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Born Monster lover

"I love everything about this novel. I would recommend it to anyone interested in reading thrillers. I disliked the love interest of the main character had to die and how he died. I chose this rating because I seriously believe this is an amazing novel and I wish I could purchase a hard copy of it. "

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Born monster

"I liked how the author used lots of detail to describe what was happening. I will be recommending this book to my friend that loves to read. I chose the ratings because the book was written really good in my opinion."

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cheyenne

"i love your story. by cheyenne"

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Sick

"This is truly sick and twisted! I LOVED EVERY BIT OF IT!!! I've read many serial killer stories and this tops them. Love sex heartbreak and a twisted mind make for an amazingly sick read. "

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Its great

"The story talks about the murdering and the horror "

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Wow!

"Loved the storyline..she was a monster but at the same time a lost soul..well written..an all around good read! Enjoyed it very much...keep writing..."

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Good

"This is definitely worth it, I liked it. But what still leaves me wondering is how they managed to get her caged yet she knows she still could free herself 😏😏"

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Great Work

"I really enjoyed reading this story, I thought of the describing being good and detailed enough especially when it came to the murders, although there were a few mistakes here and there. The main character surprised me in a good-scary way, I liked how she went from this overly careful girl to someone who was hard to recognise even for her at the end. I was a bit disappointed when she killed her other half, Caleb, but I did see that that took an important part in her final transformation. Overall, a great story with an interesting plot which keeps the reader connected, maybe a little too much monolog for my taste, but I admit that it was important in order to present the character. The ending was also unexpected and a bit twisted but somehow well-deserved for a person like her. I look forward to reading more stories from you!"

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Gruesome

"A few typos here and there but overall, gory bloody horror. The twisted milestones of the main character development ups the ante on savagery and bloodlust throughout this tale. "

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Monster

"Let's start with the story. It's different than other stories that I've read on several sites. I think the plots were alright but the way you came up with the thoughts of torturing the victims were rather too horrifying. But I guess the story demanded them. I almost threw up but that just says that your way of portraying the gruesome scenes were good. In a way, I'm quite satisfied with the ending because the evil act has to end at some point. Or you can put it like - the justice was served to the victims. Overall it was an interesting story to read. Keep up the work."

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Ending was stupid

"Did not like the reunion. Build up so much to kill stupidly."

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Ok so far

"Interesting but many grammatical errors"

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Born killer

"I love this book so far! I'm on page 62 and I've been sucked in since page 1!!! Great read!!! "

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Born monster

"Disturbing "

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Hhgffffffff

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