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What is your opinion?

Red glory

"The story is powerful; I like how it was presented. Good job writer! If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on Novel Star, just submit your story to [email protected] or [email protected]"

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I liked the author's writing style though some chapters are short

"I liked the author's writing style though some chapters are short I would recommend it to everyone who likes reading since it fits everyone I choose the ratings coz it's the best novel I've read so far"

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Quite a nice read

"Intresting story indeed but then again I wonder how long they gonna keep moving can't they atleast find a place to call home aren't they rich enough?"

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The lioness

"It’s really interesting.... will expect more ... "

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Uhul

"Super cool story love it"

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Enjoying this book

"Not my normal style of book but so far I can't put it down "

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Lojhjjbbbbjjh

"I love this story so much, I got my friend reading it even my boyfriend. We all love this"

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Left wanting more...

"I have fallen in love with this story I only with we had more updates but the quality of it makes up for the wait yet makes it tantalising You can never quite expect what makabellum is going to do or how people are reacting to her yet you feel every twist and turn with her"

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Red Glory

"I love the plot and the genuine struggle she keeps up throughout the story. Her emotions are real and it's enthralling to see how she'll handle each situation. "

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Amazing

"I loved this story because of it's uniqueness. It reminds me of the Kumari. Young girls who are chosen to represent a living goddess in the Hindu religion. (True story) I know, in that religion it's only for a day or for a couple years at most. But can you imagine living up to expectations of being an actual goddess in human form? It had to be beyond challenging. You have to believe it, in order for others to believe in you. This story puts that struggle into perspective so that you can understand the inner conflict a girl like that would be going through. It has love, war as well as loss. It's undeniably brilliant!"

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Absolutely addicting to read

"PLS UPDATE!! 😊"

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Unique

"The plot is very beautiful and love the main character!"

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Red Glory

"Awesome book!"

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Red Glory

"Everything about this book is interesting and captivating. "

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So far so good

"I can't stop reading this! I can't wait to see what happens next! "

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fun read

"good job. At one point one can not critique on the structure is style writing, as it becomes just mere preference, and there is nothing wrong. You book is this case. The structure I feeling is very appealing and the pacing is fast"

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To the person behind the screen

"It's strange I don't think I've read a book like this before but I think it's what I wanted to read for so long this and your other books the eclipse child I think it's cold but the inner dialogue of these characters are just really cool I don't know what else to say. But I really appreciate that this character is twisted and confused and just trying to keep your head above water. she just feels like I don't know what I would have done this situation probably not that like I probably would have died by now but yeah it's really cool."

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Promising In-Progress

"Although it has errors and such, it's a fair story with pluck and a good direction. "

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