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Good story

"I love the plot and the overall details the out her give"

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The Slave

"Interesting book. Want to read more"

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Imaginative!

"Great Story! Left me waiting for more! Love the plot twists and turns. Hoping for a “redeeming Slave” sequel to continue this story line. Wonderful contrast between dark and light, human and supernatural. Thank you. This too I would love to edit because the story line is fantastic for today’s struggles. Keep up the good work."

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The best.

"I loved the plot and the overall details the author gives. You don't have to try and imagine anything. If this book ever turn into telly or movie, it will be my favorite one. "

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Thrilling and Phenomenal

"The Slave has been an amazing story so far. I love how deep and detailed characters as well as plot is described by Neelam. I'm reading her books and am absolutely hooked by her story on another platform and now The Slave, The Introduction itself is gripping and I find myself wondering over title after reading it. It's enthralling and now I look forward for more. The writing style and plot makes this story a beautiful combination for a Must Read. I'll be hoping for this to getting complete and published soon. For Neelam, you are amazing and Talented, keep it up and best wishes for your future projects."

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Mysterious, romantic,thrill

"Mysterious,love and hate relationship,as well as heart touching story makes a complete picture, keep on interest ,love it "

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Nice

"Go on...Want to read more.."

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