Inkitt
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I like it

"I enjoyed this alot."

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Twists and turns never breaks any bones

"All I have to say is, will we get a second book???🥺🥺🥺🥺 I feel a cliffhanger looming over the last chapter. But will all entirety the book was awesome and the plot twists had me ensnared "

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Awesome

"Will wait for part 2"

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One Of The Best Short Novels That I Have Ever Red..!!

"The story about a loyal man and a nymph,one of the best.. but im still not satisfied, why ? Coz of the ending.What about Asha ? What happened to them ? Well , i wish you could write another one for it..good luck and keep up the best works.. "

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Demonic blood

"Its good to read about the relation between the nymph and the half blooded demon "

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Hey

"A little complicated "

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copyright!!!!

"you copied it from the movie Merlin which is copyright make up your own story you copy cat.Why can't you do punctuation and grammar and every thing you probably didn't learn in English. no one should READ this (not red) its so copied you need to fix it make another book this is too copy right I'm gonna sue you.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! "

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DON'T DESERVE ANY STAR BUT HAD TO GIVE YOU NOT BECAUSE I WANTED TO.

"I hate this bitch ass author I am crying as I write this and I hope no one else make the same mistake as I did and read your stupid book. You could have at least written it as a tragedy so we can set up our heart for heartbreak but no you decided to string us alone on a story where we fall in love only to be disappointed and heartbroken. The only reason you got any star is you need to give a star for your review to be published. For future readers DO NOT READ THIS BOOK IF YOU DO NIT LOVE TRAGEDY.🖕🏾😤😤😡😡😞😞😭😭🖕🏾"

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