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Good read

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Dragonborn

"Overall, I really like this story. It's very well written and has the spirit of a true fantasy story. I usually wouldn't write a review for a work so short at the moment (Chapter 4), but it's very well-done. Some of the opening plot points seem a tad derivative, but the entire story so far has an original feel to it. If you like Eragon, Seraphina (the first book), or anything similar, you'll probably like this."

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The Kingdom is full of betrayals

"Oh sorry for Aryian, his twins is a bad person"

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