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Eric Olafson, Neo Viking

"A traditional viking story with all the traditional outcomes, nicely put. It only disappoints me that you completely ignore that the real Vikings were strictly matriarchal people and everything except the boats belonged to women: land, houses, cattle and wealth. That's why the men went abroad to find new land, like in Normandy. That cannot be without consequences for your otherworld-vikings? "

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Eric Olafson : Neo Viking

"Good story with almost too much discord. Well written but in need of much better proof readers. Ripe for many sequels. "

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Intrige I'm

"Oie too much deception . "

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