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Very creative

"I found the world you created very different from anything I have ever seen and you give us little and important clues about it everywhere. we immerse in this world like we are really there and living it. Caelie seems a bit plain but I guess its because it's only in the beginning yet. I figure this story will get very interesting soon! "

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