I love the plot
"I love the plot of this novel So intriguing The storyline too The only bad side is some grammar errors but its not bad tho "
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"I love the plot of this novel So intriguing The storyline too The only bad side is some grammar errors but its not bad tho "
"I love your book... I have been following you from Wattpad since 2023. Your plot is really unique and fascinating. I love 😌. It’s just a pity you haven’t completed it for a long time now 😔"
"I loved the story and the plot n am now feeling very sad that I have to wait in suspense for the continuation. Tq so much for sharing this wonderful story of yours. You are an amazing writer 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻 It takes a lot of hard work, time and effort to write a story n every writer should be highly appreciated for their talent. Although grammars may not be perfect, with a little help from a good proof reader, your story will be even better. Nevertheless, grammars are just a small negligible matter n can be overlooked, no worries. Important thing is the storyline and the overall plot n characters. Kudos my dear, well done n keep up the good work. 💜💜💜"
"I have been reading this book on and off for many many years and it has never disappointed. To see it finally finished and to get a second book I am so excited. "
"I loved this story and expecting so much more from your second book "
"When would you update your next book of tis story? It's been ages seen you promise you'll be updating it. I'm still waiting for your update. I really want to finish it till the end of it and I'm dying to know what happen next... It worth the wait alright."
"The story was really good and it kept me on my toes throughout.I just feel we really didn't need the last arc of the story that will lead into book 2 and prolonging it will just make the plot too complicated but overall I would recommend this book ,7/10."
"I'm at the beginning but I'm loving those Untamed vibes!"
"I like the story but theirs still a minor problems about word just like that no major problem so far I really like this story ang I really does feel the tension in this story I read this story on wattpad but I'm confused on why author doesn't update anymore but luckily I view his/her profile and I sa his new story stating that the other chapter of your story were here so I'm glad I found your story again it been a while. 🥰🥰🥰🥰"
"Loved the story, just a bit sad with the ending. I can't wait for the next book. "
"This story was so amazing!!!! I liked the characters their personalities, the way they were portrayed, everything!!! I would recommend this book to people who love cultivation and ancient China and of course the historical genre. This is my second time reading and it's been amazing. Just don't read to fast or else you will miss some stuff. There was people on wattpad complaining how they did not understand."
"I love this story. I really liked reading this book because it was like I was watching a movie. Never have I ever been this invested in a book like this one and finish reading it in such a short time too and I am sure I will read it again. There is nothing to dislike in this book, nothing at all. Wish I had someone close to me to share the experience I had about this book. Would have recommended it to my best friend but she is not enthusiastic about reading like I am. Chose this rating because it deserves it. Big thanks to the writer for gifting us with this story <3"
"Super existing & interesting novel. I love it so much. I recommend this and 💯 sure that you won't regret reading this. Love it 💕"
"I love the story mad all the twist and turn. love both characters and their development through story"
"i actually found this masterpiece on Wattpad but since the chapters are not mostly updated there, i was convinced downloading this app for this masterpiece 😭😭 worth it tho👌🏻❤️❤️"
"Love this story. Jiang is totally my favorite character. Eagerly waiting for the sequel😍"
"I love this book so much ❤️❤️❤️, the plot, emotions, scenery description, dear author u did a good job and I really appreciate it lots of love for both the book and you ❤️❤️❤️❤️💖💖💖"
"The novel was so well written. I love the well fleshed-out characters and intricate plot. I would prescribe this to any lover of fantasy, xianxia, and intrigue. My only peeve is the grammar in some chapters could be worked on... however, it takes almost nothing away from the book. "
"One of the best books I have ever read, and I read ALOT"
"Its fun and easy going, actually nothing is new here, but like a Harry Potter book, its amazing with some good place and normal plot . It was really lovely to read "