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Petals Veiled by Darkness

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Summary

I was bothered by the whole situation. What if she thinks I'm in danger living with my brother? The last thing I would ever agree on is getting taken away from Jacob. It will kill me. Rosaline is a girl who lost her mom at a very young age, but not in any way you may think, the house became a blazing fire out of nowhere.Her mom disappeared after that, and Rosaline is now with her brother, who gives her a motherly warmth, a fatherly protection, and of course! The annoyance of big brothers! Rose is so lost since that day, nightmares are attacking her sleep, making her wake up with piercing screams.She wants to know where her mom disappeared to, she wants those dreams to go away and stop reminding her of that day over and over again.

Status
8yrs ago
Chapters
8
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Prologue

     I couldn't see anything, the smoke is so thick in my room. It threw me into a fit of hard coughing that shook my whole body and left me weak. That's it. I thought to myself, I'm going to die.

     My eyes skimmed the room, trying to find mommy or Jacob "Jakeeeeyyyy" I screamed in terror. I just wanted to wake up from this nightmare. I called my mother and brother again, trying to overcome the roar of the fire with my screams, but they never came.

     I don't know why I couldn't see mom at all, she was here a while ago, telling me a story about this branch in a tree. I sat sometimes more in the corner, trying to think of something. C'mon Rosaline, there must be a way to get out of your room or you will be fried chicken! Well, thank you myself for reminding me that I will die!

     I threw my head back and looked at the ceiling, trying to think of a way out of my room. My eyes landed on the rope ladder my brother and I fastened in my room a year ago. Wasting no time, I jumped up taking hold of one of the bars. It was a very simple rope ladder, but we sprayed it so it matched my room theme. I continued along the rope like a monkey, and when I reached the door I leaped down taking hold of the door handle, opening the door and hurried outside to the floral garden in our backyard.

     When I saw the house burning, my body rocked with suffocating sobs, trying to convince myself that mommy will wake me up, hugging me and telling me that it's just a nightmare. I waited till I lost hope because mommy never came. It never happened.

     "Jacob!" I screamed. "Jacob please come play with me."...no answer "I'm scared" I whispered. I stood there, looking at the fire swallowing my house, then I realized it didn't ruin it. My eyes widened, the fire is not affecting the bricks! No smears of black or on the walls, only smoke and heat.

     By now, I was crying so hard, tears streaming down my face and blinding me. I was about to drift into lala-land, then hands clasped around my wrist and I was dragged from behind. I tried to free myself from the stranger. "Rose it's me. Just run" I smiled at the sound of my brother and ran.

     Looking over at my brother, I realized the tears sliding down his cheeks. He gave me a small smile "Don't worry Rosaline, I will always come play with you" he told me. "You promise?" I asked, "Yes I promise". We went back to running down the street.

     When we approached the forest, we were both gasping hard, trying to catch our breath. The moment we set foot there I collapsed, and Jake caught me in his arms. Everything that happened got registered in my mind, it was too much, "Don't worry Rose, I will keep you safe" that was the last thing I heard before the darkness swallowed me whole.

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