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One destined love

"This seems like it is unfinished or there should be a second part. It kind of leaves you hanging, but it seemed to be pretty good and interesting. If a second part comes out to finish it up it would be much better."

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One destined love

"Its incredibly confusing to read. The story isnt even making any sense. Seems rushed and missing a lot of things. I stopped reading half way through chapter 4. I just couldnt do it. "

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