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Drawbridge II

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Summary

His shoulders guarded like two quiet knights, while the skin over his ribs barely...

Genre
Poetry
Author
JEM
Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Drawbridge II

His eyes were saturated like wet, rich soil

Dark brown depths with soft life inside

Soft like a perfectly bruised lime rind

And his shoulders guarded like two quiet knights

While the skin over his ribs barely insulated

The vast blue beating ocean heart inside it.

This was the way I saw him, sitting there...

Pensively searching for something inside himself

Arms crossed over like swords across locked doors

While poetry exuded like a wild mischievous ghost

Silently wording to me heavy, ominous languages.

He sat there completely unbeknownst to this talk

And it drew me in and shut me up tight inside him

The warmth I felt made the lion inside me quiet

Quiet but quaking with a maddening desire to kiss

To feel the soft petal ridge of his parting lips

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