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Great Plot and Character Development

"Before I wrote this review, I decided to re-read this story. The character development of the main character was explained in detailed in the first couple of chapters, as well as the villain. Without giving the author or his plot. I will say,.. the character growth is exceptional and it doesn’t always appear to be as it is."

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Mortal Magic:Broken

"Such a well written story,the actions were so detailed i myself am feeling the pain and every emotions from each character. So happy to be able to read something like this for free. This book especially the author deserves more attention and appreciation. I haven't even finished the story yet and I can already tell how amazing the writer is,I think this is also my first time leaving a review just after reading a few chapter. It's definitely worth sharing. "

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Mortal Magic: Broken

"This is one of those books so captivating one can't put it down. Thank you for many hours escaping reality. "

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Mortal magic: Broken

"Exception story line that was woven through each of the characters! Really the internal struggles that Archer had to experience as he strove to finally save his little sister! Descriptions of places and events was detailed without being overboard! Would recommend this story for anyone who enjoys quality magic!!"

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An Amazing Book

"A very great read🤩 i loved every chapter something different from my regular paranomal novels "

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