this needs work

"sadly i can't recommend this novel. the premise sounds interesting but the writing style just isn't good enough for me. I read the first 100 pages but then i had to quit. the different characters and scenes just aren't described enough so that the characters don't have depth and the plot lacks cohesion. in my opinion the writer has got talent but needs to work on his writing style. Make us see your vision by describing it more and take your time to make everything come to life. but i do see potential, keep working and refine what you have is my message for the author. good luck!"