What is your opinion?
A creative mind
"My favorite chapter was the last one, The Second Question. The title was clever, and it ended the collection with a sense of unease and uncertainty, the way a good horror piece should. I enjoyed this, very original ideas! I hope you continue writing."
Very dark
"I read the first five chapters and found this very interesting, from the voices at the beginning to the vile stories. I'm curious to see where you are going with this and how you are going to bring it all together. It was very effective in portraying the evil and sinfulness of humanity. Thank goodness for Christ's redemptive power in our lives. The writing itself was good, and I liked the way that you showed more than told the stories, even if it was a sort of narration from the characters' minds. It was subtle and effective. There were a lot of grammatical errors though, and that's why I marked it down. This is definitely an interesting story. Very well done. Keep writing!"
