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Mind of the Lost Girl

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Summary

"You were perfection, You knew how to play the game..." -Baby_girl300

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1: You.

You were standing there,

Brown eyes,

Brown lips,

Your stare pierced my skin,

Your hands clasped together,

Your hair stuck up,

Almost as high as your ego,

Your body strong,

Practically suffocating.


You were perfection,

You knew how to play the game,

You whispered sweet lies,

Along with bitter truths,

Your soft fingers twirled my curly hair,

Around and around,

Your body wrapped around mine,

Your hand squeezed my heart,

I breathed in your scent,

The tingle started,

My body tensed and relaxed,

You whispered more sweet lies,

I didn’t have to force myself to believe them.


You squeezed so hard,

I shattered,

My heart,

A puddle in your hands,

You untangled yourself from me,

But I didn’t from you,

Where are you going?,

I’m sorry.


I’m sorry I wasn’t what you wanted,

I tried to stay above ground,

To not drown in a basket of insecurity and dreams,

I wanted to trust you,

I wanted you to trust me,

I wanted you to love me.

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