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I hope there is a second part to this story...

"The story is good and though it ends with the end of the journey I am hoping for a second story that better completes the storyline because there are a lot of unfinished parts. What was so important in the royal archive that she was willing to take a day there as payment? Do the princes ever reconcile? Is Raza ever truly defeated? Please write a second story that clears some of this up please."

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What a read!!!

"This book is intricate and beautiful in design. Its engaging and heartfelt and allows the reader to travel into a different world!!! I cant wait for the next one!! Congratulations on a really well written book. Thank you xx"

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Birthright

"If you enjoy a heartfelt tale of fighting and magic, wondrous peoples and places, this is worth reading. It is an heroic story, clean and cleanly told, full of wonder and self-sacrifice. And the sub-creation of well-done. I am thankful for finding it. (Teacher Notes: I stalled a little in the middle when the perspectives became too varied. I was thrown off at times when the breaks between perspectives were unmarked. But these are minor matters.)"

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