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Love

"I do love this book. The characters and plot were great. Everything is as it should be"

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The Ancient One

"Actually a thoroughly enjoyable, if a little weird, story. Well written and in the main, well edited book "

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Ancient one

"Interesting take on the vampire story. Really enjoyed the fully fleshed out characters and well laid out action. Good strong lead characters and really like feisty kristi. Well done!"

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It is getting better and better!

"I truly enjoyed this story! A bit of a different approach to 'vampires'. I loved that she is such a strong female character! And Lovestory was very cute as well! Highly recommended! "

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The Ancient One

"I enjoyed the story. It was a very interesting read."

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Really good!

"I really like a story with a very interesting character. Thank you for this story. Your area an amazing writer! "

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A very good novel

"Wow that was a great novel and can't wait to read more of your novel"

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Riveting read

"A captivating tale with originality and humour. Plenty of action and a real page turner. Very few spelling and grammatical errors easily corrected for publication. Thank you to the author for hours of reading pleasure. "

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The ancient one

"Good plot ant take on vampire lore . Excellent characterization but sometimes German language quotes made it harder to read . Could be a way to tie your books together. What a combination Melanie Lilly and Krista would make . Together they could change the world . Could the professor have been influenced by an off world humans possibly the virus related the development of the serum the used for there experiments. So many cool ways to go . Have a great thanksgiving. Keep up the good work . Working on a story now two in fact. God bless!!"

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