What is your opinion?
Strays
"Great storyline and I loved the characters! "
Great!
"I really like this story. More people should read it. "
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"I really liked the plot of this story. It was amazing to read about the past that carved the woman at present. It was better than I expected."
Strays
"I enjoyed the book. It was kind of hard to follow going back and forth with the different characters. Until I was more familiar with the characters. It's like a soap opera. After that, all was well. I "
Strays
"This book has a pretty good plot. There are some technical errors that I would fix. Things like::: For Example: He read the rights as he made the collar and led him to the waiting car. Other officers were escorting women out of the house. The above sentence has 3 pronouns in one sentence. He -he- him I would change one to a name so there is a specific noun. The second part of the sentence, I would change. Starting a sentence with 'other;' is usually not permitted. I would say: Caleb finished reading the perp his rights while leading him to the car. Women were being escorted out of the house by other officers. OR Caleb finished reading the perp his rights and led him to the car, while women were being escorted out of the house by other officers. Just re-word some sentences and this could be a really good story. The good thing about this site is that you can edit and resave your work. You can also use Grammarly which will help you with grammar, punctuation, and other issues."
