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Short and sweet

"A good story. So sad that Trevor died so soon. They could have had a beautiful life together. They had the best for the time they had. Loved it."

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The Assassins queen

"I only just started the first chapter tonight and wow, I'm already hooked I cant wait to find out what happens next definitely added this to my reading list. its rare to find a book that grabs you from the beginning and throws you into the action but when it does its an amazing ride and I don't want to get off this roller coaster. so far the characters are very strong and well structured and the personality of each one is so strong its like I could jump into this story and just watch it play out."

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Good

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The assasin queen

"The story is powerful; I like how it was presented. Good job writer! If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on Novel Star, just submit your story to [email protected] or [email protected]"

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The assassin queen

"I love this book hate Aaron hmm hate king rich or something like that"

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Finally badass female characters

"Lovely book, but be more careful about the grammar as it gets rather difficult to understand it sometimes. Except this minor thing the book is great, and I enjoyed reading it. Loved the fact that the lead female character is absolute badass and strong, and her example is followed throughout the years, proper legacy there. Great work. "

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The Assasin queen

"I love it. And thats all....i think book2 May be The best for me.... because i love this Story so much.."

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Princess Assassin

"Very intriguing and full of action. "

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Good

"The story line is good but it should have been old times... Not that technology and stuff But I like it though 5 star "

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I forgot

"Very nice but sad☹️😔🤒😠😢😭"

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Great but tragic story. Mi

"Wished Trevor didn't die"

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Great novel

"Great and nice story"

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Absolutely beautiful

"It was so good, I really loved it's plot. I liked the ending, how the outcome of one single lie from the king ruined everyone's life, including his family's. Although the writing style in the beginning was quite confusing but as we reached the mid it was good, all the confusions and doubts were cleared. Great work. 😃"

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Good

"Good book. Makes u really imagine the situation and the protagonist in detail. "

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The Assasin Queen

"I really loved the story line and over all plot of this book. It was very fresh and different. Although the ending was terribly heartbreaking."

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Love it

"Please let him live"

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The Assassins Queen

"I throughly enjoyed reading your story. Keep up the creative mojo!"

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The assassin queen

"Loved the climax of the stry..... Nd really looking frwrd to ur next one 😍"

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The assassin queen

"Loved the story, very empowering for women, absolutely great read can't wait to read another by this author"

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Assassin queen

"I liked that this book was so action packed and had epic moments around every corner. I’d recommend this to someone that likes adventure stories with a message"

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