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The Loop

"Bitter sweet and beautiful! Love it! 🖤💙🖤 "

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The loop

"This is a beautiful short story. "

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Fun short story

"Love this author's style. Even with such a short story, the details make for a captivating and fun reading experience. One of the most enjoyable short stories I've read."

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Beautiful

"The story was beautiful and I absolutely enjoyed it the ending was perfect in opinion but there might be people who might not be satisfied"

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Wonderful short story

"Five stars"

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Short but sweet

"Extremly cute and sweet short story. Loved it!"

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