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Blue Eyes

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Summary

'This couldn't be happen' this Is just a fucking dream how can be a mate with the same sexuality I am a fucky guy for God Sake. 'I AM Not A GAY' I am not taking this what would people thought and me This is story of Rick and Aiden Rick is a wearwolf and Aiden is a human but the problem is rick thought his mate going to be a most beautiful girl but when he find out he is mated to a male same gender he freak out and wanted to reject him but to bad for Rick that his wolf hunter come forward and show his most dominating site and stops Rick to for rejecting there mate because Hunter fall in love with aiden so he take things in his hand which make Rick irritates because Hunter want Rick to feel jealous so that he accept aiden as there mate because if Rick did not do this then Hunter have no choice than took over at Ricks body's to stay with his mate forever and in other side aiden find out that his long time crush Rick is his mate but Rick did not want to accept him this break maidens heart and he start making distance between them but when Ricks wolf confessed his love for aiden and Aiden didn't have a heart to reject Hunter Ricks wolf so he put a condition that only Hunter is allowed to meet him which make Hunter happy but Rick got jealous over it because aiden start loving Hunter but stay away from Rick now what will Rick do will he accept his growing love for aiden or not

Status
3yrs ago
Chapters
31
Rating
4.0 (2 reviews)
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1

Aidan (pov)

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Ugh! I growl and slam the alarm clock after some struggle with my comfort comforter I wack up and glare to my alarm clock and see the time and smack my head to my pillow and growled my head was spinning like hell Ugh! I gather my self and start standing in to feet and go to bathroom to do my business and take a nice shower to get ready for the another day in to that hell hole who called by school. Jeez man why people go to school and most importantly after weekend why God why men am sounds like a girl now greet.

After taking a nice shower I dress up in light cream color t-shirts with blue jacket and a blue jeans I slip my shouse and take my backpack and headed to downstairs in to the kitchen and greeted by the awesome smell of pancake and Bacon with lemon sauce wiead I know but hey this is specialty of one of my father men oh you all think how I said one of my father oh did not I tell you that my both dads are GAY. Shocking right but what can I say oh and one more shocking surprise am Adiean Carter are also IS A G.Y.A can believe that well just believe it dear because that’s what I am hey but that’s not mean am some kind of badass I am a smart and good looking boy well that’s I think.

So after all morning things and a heavy hangover here I am sitting in the kitchen island and smelling the amazing aroma of morning breakfast made by my father Oliver Carter who is smiling at me and placing the food in to my plate and singing some tune which I really don’t know but I love his singing it’s make my day more energetic so I start eating my breakfast and finish it very soon and after that I said good bye to dad because am gating late for my school I take my car key from key stand and walk to my BMW car and hopped in the car and start driving to the he’ll hole I mean to the school jeez man I hate school.

After driving for good 25 minutes I park my car to school’s parking lot and get out from the car only to meet a born crash hug given by my one of best friend jaani she can take down anyone who try to be smart in front of her and crash him or her like a chips don’t mind I love her is my best friend but I also love my life men if didn’t pull me away from her in 2 second I swear am going to die any time soon.

‘Can’t..... Breath jaani’ I said to her oops sorry honey boo she said to me and also let go me. Finally I breath in relief but not in happy way don’t mind I love her cuteness but not her given name to me it’s like am some type of bear from animal movies yak.

So after that born crash hug we headed to the school and jaani start telling me hole story’s of this weekend

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author

why is you using “and” so much

5 years
author

very hard to read because of the grammar and sentence structure.

a year
author

Yeah, I'm sorry, but this is horrible. You have the potential for a really good story here, with an enticing plot. But the grammar is horrendous and the sentence building just makes no sense. You need an editor program or someone to edit for you, coz this is completely unreadable. I'm sorry. Keep it up tho, practice makes perfect ❤️

a year

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