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Very Cute!

"Very cute short story. Left me smiling. Conway used the setting--the fog--in a delicious way. Love that he packed so much into such a few words. He made me care about the characters in just a few paragraphs. You can read it in 5 minutes, but it will make you smile much longer."

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Cute College Romance

"Poor Shelly, she's done what so many college students have done: chose her social life over her class work, and as a result, is in danger of not getting into her master's program. There's nothing at all wrong with Kevin, except he comes along at exactly the wrong time. And he knows it. Such a cute turn of events! I'd love to read more. You know it's good when you're searching for the "continue" button! Well done!"

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