"Rise of the Paladin"

"Alan, I realize your story is forming. May I make some suggestions. Set the stage your characters are existing within..........The location, the terrain, name of the people occupying the land where this story is taking place........describe your characters, who they are, Royalty or commoners, etc. Describe weapons, animals, etc. set your stage and build upon the foundation of the stage............you have a good sense for writing your story, take the time also to edit it, before submission for any grammar or punctuation errors if any. Remember, this is your work, treat it like GOLD. precious at best..............keep writing. You have a lot to share to the world.......continue and paint your story with beautiful words and circumstances..................smile, you are on your way as a new Author...........congrats........... william elliott at https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/185550 Dead or Alive..............."