Chapter 1
She sits alone
In the night
No one cared
No one ever did,
She was alone on a cliffside
She was going to make sure she died.
She stood up determent to die
"Goodbye world... you ugly piece of shit."
She steps closer to the edge
"NO STOP!"
Someone said
She looked back to find her mum
"No, goodbye..."
With that she jumps off the cliff.
A really deep scene here. I can almost feel it. Just one thing tho, you misspelled 'determined' and wrote 'determent' instead.